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Andrea364

Age/Gender: 13, Female
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Entry #37

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Andrea364

Poems

Posted by Andrea364 Jun. 23, 2008 @ 3:31 PM EDT

I'm about to make a fucking wall of poems...

Starting with this one I just found in my 4th grade notebook. I made a few minor modifications and added a line or two...

The Men in the White Coats

Here come the men in the white coats.
They're going to take you away to that place.
That place with the white walls.

They're going to take you to the void.
To the unknown.
The place of confusion.

They're going to take you away.
They're going to make you live with the crazies.
They're going to have you pushing up daisies.

They're going to disect you.
Inspect you.
Misdirect you.
INFECT YOU.

They're going to leave you in a little white room.

Foaming at the mouth.
Cloudy Eyes.
They're going to make you DIE.

- - -

Ah, here's another. I found this one in the same note book.

Space

Space.
I need my space...
And if you don't give me it,
You're going to be in deep shit...

If you really are the one caring,
Then stop your stupid staring.

It may be that I'm already crazy like that,
But if you still fail to see my point,
I'll just smash in your face with a baseball bat.

I need my space...
Get away from me,
I'm going to do worse than just use mace on your ass,
Infact, I'll smash in your fucking face or impale you with broken glass,

You think I'm sick,
You think I'm crazy,

Well, I think you need to suck it up and be a man,
I'll shut you up myself when I can.

I'm just your average every day kid,
So put a lid on it,
I'm tired of this shit,
So give me my space,
And stay out of my face.

I know the Truth

I see through your illusion,
Your deception doesn't phase me,
My grip on reality slowly disappears as I'm drifting away in my own bubble of insanity,
You haven't the slightest idea that you still can't control me...

You think that I am your slave,
I beg to differ,
You always find the words to say to me,
I know better,
But something is holding me back,

I cause you confusion,
I watch as you slip away into delusion,
I laugh cause you're seeing hallucinations,

I love that look on your face,

Here's the hole,
Here's the ace,

I know I'm a player, but I be ballin',
And if that's a crime,
We know damn well that I'm guilty,

You think you own me,
But the truth is that I drive you crazy,
The only one who owns anyone here is me.

Updated: 06/23/08 5:21 PM Log in to comment! | Share this!

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22 Comments

Jun. 23, 2008 | 3:35 PM UltimateAxl says:

I can't leave this blog without no comments! ;)

A wall of poems you say? That's interesting, and besides, they are really fun to read, only if you have an open mind of what they write.

Jun. 23, 2008 | 3:42 PM Andrea364 responds:

Mine are usually just disturbing though.


Jun. 23, 2008 | 3:46 PM Nikenick says:

Sounds great!

Jun. 23, 2008 | 3:50 PM Andrea364 responds:

Yayzorz!


Jun. 23, 2008 | 4:12 PM UltimateAxl says:

I don't mind disturbing, really to tell you the truth. I'm more into that anyway, sometimes I get into poems about prophecies and other mysterious stuff.

Jun. 23, 2008 | 4:18 PM Andrea364 responds:

Mine revolve more around insanity, blood, gore, violence, anger, and murder than anything.


Jun. 23, 2008 | 5:07 PM Nikenick says:

You're such a great poet..

Jun. 23, 2008 | 5:15 PM Andrea364 responds:

Not really

*blush*

See what you did?


Jun. 24, 2008 | 6:38 AM Nikenick says:

Seriously , you are!

Jun. 24, 2008 | 7:21 AM Andrea364 responds:

Seriously, I suck at poetry


Jun. 24, 2008 | 7:32 AM Nikenick says:

No you don't, I think you're really good at it!

Jun. 24, 2008 | 7:43 AM Andrea364 responds:

I think I suck at it!


Jun. 24, 2008 | 9:30 AM Nikenick says:

You don't suck at it!!!

Jun. 24, 2008 | 10:03 AM Andrea364 responds:

Ok, I take your word for it.


Jun. 24, 2008 | 11:47 AM X-Gary-Gigax-X says:

Hello alt

Jun. 24, 2008 | 12:41 PM Andrea364 responds:

Wtf?


Jun. 24, 2008 | 12:59 PM Nikenick says:

Seriously, your poems are very great!

Jun. 24, 2008 | 1:08 PM Andrea364 responds:

Eh, I dunno. A lot of them are pretty bad.


Jun. 24, 2008 | 3:03 PM MudkipsPiano says:

I'm sorry but that was fucking terrible.

Jun. 24, 2008 | 3:14 PM Andrea364 responds:

Don't care


Jun. 24, 2008 | 5:29 PM UltimateAxl says:

The poem "Space" sound a little cheesy to me. But it's great effort that you posted it up there though.

Remember not all poems need to rhyme, it just needs a special meaning to it.

Jun. 25, 2008 | 9:56 AM Andrea364 responds:

I wrote that one a bit earlier than 4th grade, so it sucks


Jun. 25, 2008 | 2:18 AM BoomEver says:

your poems are pretty good, i liked the men in white coats one.

Jun. 25, 2008 | 9:57 AM Andrea364 responds:

Thanks, that's my favorite as well.


Jun. 25, 2008 | 3:57 AM thingus002 says:

If I knew what they meant, I'd probably criticize you. But seeing as I don't, I'll just leave you alone now

Jun. 25, 2008 | 9:57 AM Andrea364 responds:

Don't leave me!


Jun. 25, 2008 | 8:44 PM The-Bobanater says:

1,342

Jun. 26, 2008 | 8:52 AM Andrea364 responds:

364 = bettur

Duh.


Jun. 25, 2008 | 10:10 PM X-Gary-Gigax-X says:

Truth. Nikenick doesn't care about you, he is just looking to get his willy wet. Truth.

Jun. 26, 2008 | 8:53 AM Andrea364 responds:

Eh, I wouldn't really care. I'm bored 99.9% of the time. I wouldn't mind.


Jun. 26, 2008 | 9:15 AM Nikenick says:

X-Gary-Gigax-X STFU, I do care about her..

Jun. 26, 2008 | 11:12 AM Andrea364 responds:

Good boy. ^_^


Jun. 26, 2008 | 2:48 PM Yghrulez says:

I never understood poetry.

Jun. 26, 2008 | 3:01 PM Andrea364 responds:

I still don't


Jun. 26, 2008 | 3:30 PM Onizero says:

Good stuff! I didn't know poems had cursing though o_o

Jun. 26, 2008 | 3:49 PM Andrea364 responds:

They can, if you want them to


Jun. 26, 2008 | 4:48 PM igott says:

heres a poem about pie, it may be shot but stupid but at least it's about pie.

Pie is King
Pie is God
I own king and god.
I eat king and god.
I shall share my king and god with you,
as long as you share.

Jun. 26, 2008 | 5:41 PM Andrea364 responds:

Pie for teh win!


Jun. 26, 2008 | 5:15 PM The-Bobanater says:

364.534223?

Jun. 26, 2008 | 5:42 PM Andrea364 responds:

364 is teh sexxorz, don't you agree?


Jun. 26, 2008 | 6:30 PM Der-Lowe says:

I can't write poetry. My thing is prose. But I haven't written anything in a while either.
I phail.

Jun. 26, 2008 | 6:47 PM Andrea364 responds:

lol


Jun. 26, 2008 | 7:14 PM Der-Lowe says:

laughing at people is bad :(

Jun. 26, 2008 | 7:29 PM Andrea364 responds:

I - I wasn't laughing at you... I was... uh... Laughing with you! Yeah... That's it.

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