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If this is the demo, I know I'm definitely going to be blown away by the full version. This is really cool. I don't think I can think of anything to improve at all. The song makes me feel like my ears are getting high and having a party. I love this song.
Author's Response:
haha thats an interesting way of putting it
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This is okay, but synth guitars aren't good for songs. They just suck. Trust me, I know. Ditch the synth/midi guitar, and have a decent player record something for you.
The bass is good, and so is the organ and synth brass. They sound cool, but the synth guitars ruined it.
Sorry if I sound like I'm being an ass, but it's 1 AM here and I'm having a bad day. Either I'm not sleeping well or I'm not at all. I don't mean to be an ass about your song.
Author's Response:
I don't mind at all. I actually appreciate what you're telling me. I'll remember that next time. I also was going for more of a retroey(?) feel to the song, thus the synth.
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I like it... Somewhat.... The synths all sound so out of place, even with nice accompanying instruments used with them. This is cool, but I just didn't feel it. Also, I'm not a big fan of the Fruity Loops Studio series, I prefer something more simple, like Mixcraft 4. It has a library (even if some of the loops suck), and it has features that let you make up rythms with synth instruments in clip form. (ex: you can use a drum kit synth to 'build' the drums you have here) Not saying FL isn't good, but MXC works better for me when I want to make tech, trance or dance.
Author's Response:
is mixcraft 4 free??
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The beginning sounds pretty scary. I'd say it'd be good for a scary movie. I hear a familiar melody in there from another submission I listened to ages ago. Good work! There are so many transitions, but that makes it more cool. In a few places, the synth and the choir didn't fit. That was around 2:09 to 2:20 seconds into it. This is really cool, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the review. I was kind of going for something more ominous in the beginning that transitioned to something light and ethereal. As for the familiar melody, I do have a piano part from this song that is close to one of my other songs, Emotionally Screwed. The only other explanation that I can offer is that the melody that your thinking of might have used some of the same loops as I used here. I hear what you're saying about the choir not matching and I tried to fix that in post production, messing with the levels, but some of it still got through. Thanks for the compliments. Will do.
-AvatarKami
(Kami the Avatar)
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There simply aren't words to effectively describe my opinions on this, but I will try to voice them as well as I can possibly manage. This song is utterly magnificent. I haven't heard anything so beautiful in all my years of listening to music and taking band class. Hell, even after I played in an orchestra with the best musicians from several different districts, I haven't heard something so epic. I don't think improvements would even be possible without making something else flawed. I'm not the best critic, or the best at complimenting either, but I have to say, this is just too good. I think my ears had an orgasm, if that's possible. It's just that good.
Author's Response:
Ah, I knew you had some kind of musical experience. Your reviews inclined me to believe it. Thank you for the kind words.
Ears most certainly can have orgasms.
Thanks again!
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This song is pretty funny. ^_^ This sounds more like white-rap to me. It's pretty cool. I like it. You could've used more bass and put more variety in the drums and synths. It's a really good song.
Author's Response:
lol yeah, i'd say its pretty white rap hah
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It's a bit awkward thanks to all the flanging on the vocals. It's just a weird song to me... I don't really like it. Better synths would be a nice improvement. ACID Pro isn't exactly the best thing when you want to make a song like this. Sure, it has nice Acid synths, but not much else. Try buying a keyboard or something cause this just isn't your thing in my opinion.
Author's Response:
Your honesty kills me and I will not deny your opinion. Coming back from your profile, you're half my age and have more talent in the music field than I have and that says a lot so, I respect your word. However, making "music" is only my video game and playing an instrument is something I don't know how to do. If it weren't for my car, I'd probably throw more money into more professional, musical apparatuses and maybe learn to sing. Thanks for listening!
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I like it, but the fast tempo and kick ruined it for me. I was digging everything else, but the kick... It just annoyed the hell out of me. I would have loved it had the kick not been so loud and off tempo. Everything else was fine. That's pretty much all the problems I have with it. This deserves the second spot. ^_^
Author's Response:
sorry that the kick ruined it for you, but i liked the sound of that kick when i put it in. Im glad you enjoyed the song as a whole though :D
~HM~
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Sounds like a sad tech song to me. Could be used for a flash back, like jadog said. I'm putting this in my playlist now so I can play centipede or some other arcade game and listen to this instead of classic 8 bit music. I agree with IronRising on the thing with the background instrument being too prominent for this song. Overall, nice work!
Author's Response:
the synth is what you guys were talkin about eh? LOL ok yeah. i'll probably end up changing that up or even adding effects in the long run so its not as bad as is now.
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This was good from the beginning! It sounds both scary and at the same time, it draws you in to listen. I like the bass you used for this and the way you made everything fit together. This would be very good as a sound track. This is the best hip-hop song I've heard in a very long time. You should go pro. I like the static that you threw in at the beginning. This is going in my playlist, and never leaving from that sacred spot. You have me hopelessly addicted to your songs.
Author's Response:
Merci beaucoup!
la seule commentaire descriptive lol
D'habitude, je ne fais pas les chansons de rap
The static in the beginning were samples of turntable needles scratching vinyl I believe. (Didn't know how to say that in french haha)
thanks again
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